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03-19-2006, 10:11 PM
Re: My story

Ive been working hard heres ep 2.(post before is 3) The final for a while:

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The Long Night



Joy: (wakes up and sees no one is around) Hello? Hello? (starts getting worried and walks around) Hello? Hello? Hello? (she starts spinning and crying) Please help me Please! Help me please!!!!(she falls to her knees and cries).
Trevor: Joy. Joy. Joy wake up your having a nightmare.
Joy: (wakes up panting and crying) Where? Where am I?
Trevor: I don’t know darling I don’t know. But you’re ok for now.
Joy: Who are you?
Trevor: I’m Trevor? Don’t you remember. We were going for a drink when we walked by that notice board and it said.
Joy: (she mumbles)Your purpose: 1C 2A 3G 4E 5D…….. But we were in the hall…then the eyes…then the, the bus. I remember now
Trevor: Aye, what bus?
Josh: Ye Joy. What Bus?
(flashback of Joy on the bus. Her narrating as it goes on)
Joy: I woke up and I was chained up to this chair.(she squirms) I saw we were in this Bus.(looks at her surroundings) But there was no driver. We were just driving. I tried looking out the window(she turns to window) right when I did….(red eyes show up on screen)
Josh: The eyes… the Red eyes
Sankah: You to seem to be the only ones to remember this incident. Maybe youd mind to fill us in more……
Benny: Right now mate, I think we need to setup camp and find some food.
Brian: I say we all split up into two groups Benny, Elaine, and I will go to find some wood and supplies to set up camp. The rest of you will….
Sankah: (Interrupts) I will get the food, Alone
(flashback kicks in)
Joy: (Walks into a kitchen and sits at a table where a guy reading a newspaper is sitting)
Derek: (looks down form paper) Yes hunny?
Joy: Derek. I keep having these dreams….
Derek: About what dear?
Joy: You…..
Derek: It cant be all that bad now then(smailes)
Joy: You get taken away from me…. You just disappear. There’s dinging. Then an alarm goes off. Then it goes black. And, your gone.
Derek: Well, dear. Its just a dream. Its not like you’re a psychic or anything.

(Goes back to present day)
Brian: Are you sure……
Sankah: Sankah, my name is Sankah.
Brian: Are you sure Sankah? We do not know this place. We do not know where we are or if there is anything or anyone else out there. It could be dangerous.
Sankah: Do not worry about me. I will find my way around.
Brian: Alright. If that’s what you want. Everyone come with me. Gather any kind of stones, wood, and vines you can find.
Elaine: Brian. I think we should be a bit more creative this. Look we have snow and it seems like its 30 degrees out here and its not melting. In fact there’s flowers growing in them. We have Trees with green leaves and trees with orange and brown leaves as if it were fall.
Benny: I guess maybe we could be a little creative (smiles)
Sankah: I will meet You here in two hours.
Josh: I guess it’s a date.



(flash back begins again)



Joy: (is sitting at a desk in a office, supposedly hers. There is a patient lying down on the couch as Joy questions her) Mrs. Rodger, How long has it been since your husband has passed away?
Michelle: 3 Months (she says while wiping eyes) He said he was invited to some convention. 2 days later I got a call. It said My husband was found. Lying on the sidewalk he just kept saying the red will show fear when you look in. Do not look into the red. The red is bad. The red will show fear when you look in. Do not look into the red. The red is bad. He just kept repeating it over and over again. Then after he got to the hospital he yelled No No please not my wife not her. Leave her alone. No not the eyes not the eyes. He then started to shake and well. They lost him.
Joy: Mrs. Rodger, your husband kept mentioning Red eyes. What do you think that means? Not the Red Eyes?
Michelle: A few weeks before he passed on he kept having nightmares. He woke up in the middle of night screaming this combination of numbers and letters.
Joy: Do you remember this combination?
Michelle: Yes. One night I wrote it down.(she pulls out a piece of paper from her pocket. She reads it) 1C 2A 3G 4E 5D.
Joy: 1C 2A 3G 4E 5D? C A G E D? Caged?

(flashback ends)

(The group comes back with all their supplies. But there is a wall now and a door)
Brian: Did the Chinese come?
Elaine: What do you mean?
Brian: I never knew that there was a second great wall of china.
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